My Personal Essay

   

When I first started my personal essay I had to think about what I was going to write about. I started writing ideas that I had a tried to be really descriptive and use senses like smell and hearing. I got an idea and wrote a couple of paragraphs. 

    Then I changed the main topic of the essay and i changed the what I already wrote to fit it better. I was also able to think of new things to write about and was able to add more to my essay. Overall I think I did pretty well on the assignment.